Item: A Guide to Kingdom Building ( Me Reincarnated 365 x)
Rating: 4
Author: RedGunner

RedGunnerLv34yr

2020-11-02 14:02

Plus Points: Writing quality is the main plus point to this great world background. Update stability is good and character design is also up to the mark. Drawbacks: To me, I do read slow-paced stories and enjoy them if they intrigue me. This story is Slow-paced but the problem is that it feels like it never took off, it's still there exactly how it started after nearly 40 chapters. They is no sign of the system promised in the tags, MC is reincarnated so many times but seems so underwhelming, I mean... I get that he lost his abilities but still I did not find that aura or charm of a guy who lived 364 times. I liked the slow pace at the start but as the chapters went by, it got boring and I felt like abandoning the book. There are no interesting scenarios to read further. I hope the author correct this.

A Guide to Kingdom Building ( Me Reincarnated 365 x)

MoeJam90

4.3

261 Chs

Liked by 6 people

Replies8

MoeJam90Author

Hi, Thanks for your honest review! I understand why you got frustrated as to how the MC's progression is slow and that's okay! Thank you for pointing this out. I am already working on it as I find it too slow for my taste as well, I just realized it later. I hope you'll continue to read and support this novel! Ad Astra et Ultra!

4yr

RedGunnerLv3

sure, I am waiting for more chapters but in your tags, I saw a 'System' tag....is it really there???

MoeJam90:Hi, Thanks for your honest review! I understand why you got frustrated as to how the MC's progression is slow and that's okay! Thank you for pointing this out. I am already working on it as I find it too slow for my taste as well, I just realized it later. I hope you'll continue to read and support this novel! Ad Astra et Ultra!

4yr

MoeJam90Author

it will take a while for him to make one, but it is included in the works...

RedGunner:sure, I am waiting for more chapters but in your tags, I saw a 'System' tag....is it really there???

4yr

MoeJam90Author

and correct me if I am wrong, but when i meant by system, it meant like how their world works... governance, culture, system of power and magic. I may have used the term loosely, so I understand if you think there's none.

4yr

HotRedFlamingLv3

Glad you corrected the tag, it's just when people refer to system, they mean the system in video games where they level up, have stats, defense offense, skills that kinda stuff

MoeJam90:and correct me if I am wrong, but when i meant by system, it meant like how their world works... governance, culture, system of power and magic. I may have used the term loosely, so I understand if you think there's none.

4yr

MoeJam90Author

I'm thankful he pointed it out. I'm still new to the genrr and at times I might get it wrong.

HotRedFlaming:Glad you corrected the tag, it's just when people refer to system, they mean the system in video games where they level up, have stats, defense offense, skills that kinda stuff

4yr

RedGunnerLv3

okay, the system I am thinking is rpg one, because the system in tag means it contains something in the sort of litrpg. Anyways, it's fine if the story can get some pacing.

MoeJam90:and correct me if I am wrong, but when i meant by system, it meant like how their world works... governance, culture, system of power and magic. I may have used the term loosely, so I understand if you think there's none.

4yr

MoeJam90Author

I am thankful yiu pointed that out. Yes, there will be progress going forward.

RedGunner:okay, the system I am thinking is rpg one, because the system in tag means it contains something in the sort of litrpg. Anyways, it's fine if the story can get some pacing.

4yr

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