Review Detail of Nullabutton in Vampire Lord's Rare Prisoner

There's a huge jump in the writing quality as it gets better and more cohesive with newer chapters. One thing I'd like to suggest is that instead of flatly stating a character's mood, how about conveying through expressions and demeanors and choice of words in dialogues? That would give a bit more depth to the already rich story. I myself am not a big fan of the genre, but I can still see others salivating over the plot progression. Kudos!