Review Detail of kristall77 in One Thrust Man: Journey Through the Multiverse
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If you want to make an r-18 novel, at least put some thought into it. Saitama looks like the dumbest person in the whole world with absolutly no character to him. Characters also react to him like everything he does is normal. Ik it is r18, but even pornos have some sort of logic in them, which your story doesnt have.
One Thrust Man: Journey Through the Multiverse
Master4thWall
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Hmm, I agree that you statement is true, but only for the first few chapters. I'm sure the recent chapters are good.(I'm just writing for fun, trying to improve my writing skills, so it's normal to be bad,I guess.) So, what's the reason for the 1 star? I'm sure it isn't just because of Saitama's personality alone.
