Review Detail of Shem_Sama in One Thrust Man: Journey Through the Multiverse

Item: One Thrust Man: Journey Through the Multiverse
Rating: 4.2

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Shem_SamaLv13yrShem_Sama

Dude not to sound rude or something but I felt like the MCs character felt forced.? And I know that it's wish fulfillment but can you not make his character..dunno "bland"? Or something..

One Thrust Man: Journey Through the Multiverse

Master4thWall

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Master4thWallAuthorMaster4thWall

Thanks for the review, I'm still learning to write so this might be a problem. I'd try to show more thoughts and emotions of Mc from now on. Thanks for the review it'd help me write.☺️

3yr