I will try to give a synopsis/summary for this story for people who want to read this as the author didn't make one. So basically the mc is the older brother of kakashi and takes kakashi's place like age wise between rin and obito yet not really... I have to specify that he is just a normal person of the naruto world not some reincarnation shit. He uses a longsword(no shit considering the title) The grammar is mostly ok with a few exceptions in like 'he' and 'her' This story is especially good at creating very real feeling characters and making you feel emotions for them and never really feels unnatural. And I would recommend reading this
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LIKEwell a useful comment overall. but considering the title he could've used a short sword, long sword, it'd actually be more likely if he used. a katana considering the title, could've been a tanto since they use them a lot in naruto, could've been a great sword or a rapier, a broadsword etc. that's just considering the title
Yah but it was more on the fact he uses A sword...not what kind but I guess I did phrase that a bit wrong bit eh
TheMothMan:well a useful comment overall. but considering the title he could've used a short sword, long sword, it'd actually be more likely if he used. a katana considering the title, could've been a tanto since they use them a lot in naruto, could've been a great sword or a rapier, a broadsword etc. that's just considering the title
Swordmanship is different from Kenjutsu
TheMothMan:well a useful comment overall. but considering the title he could've used a short sword, long sword, it'd actually be more likely if he used. a katana considering the title, could've been a tanto since they use them a lot in naruto, could've been a great sword or a rapier, a broadsword etc. that's just considering the title
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TheMothMan:well a useful comment overall. but considering the title he could've used a short sword, long sword, it'd actually be more likely if he used. a katana considering the title, could've been a tanto since they use them a lot in naruto, could've been a great sword or a rapier, a broadsword etc. that's just considering the title