Review Detail of LazyMaker in Prince Rose

This is a constructive criticism! -Your writing is good, but a little confusing. -I've had a chapter so far, so I can't judge much. -I found the [Prologo] story very crude and also confusing, in addition there was not much explanation for what happened to the MC when he changed his appearance or even when he was born. -The MC did not have a real description and was not really presented, and certainly the author left him a lot in the background, causing him to have almost zero development. -I say again, this first chapter so there is no way to get a sense of the world.