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2023-02-14 08:30

I've been really enjoying it so far but there's loads of slice of life stuff and he's always just a little bit to weak to fight the enemies, he never does anything alone and it's getting worse, he's now weaker than his wife and she's constantly saving him

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I will not lie. When i first saw this in my mind i was thinking, why would someone ever think of doing something like this. Honestly there were a few very minor grammar mistakes but in no way did that make this unreadable. Now however, i have read all 264 chapters and the next thing i knew was that i wanted more. Im invested in this and very curious to see how this will overlap with the actual Dragon ball series. I will admit however that the thing that keeps me a little overwhelmed at times are the "mature" moments that seem to have increased. Now i don't mind some "mature" moments here and there but to me if feels a bit much. Still thats a personal thing which i am willing to accept for the sake of my curiosity and my attention to the immense detail of the dragon ball universe along with the power levels which i admit i missed when they kinda stopped doing it but i could understand why after all that has happened in the series. I also know and appreciate that the original source is mentioned to make EVERYONE AWARE that yes if you want the original source you can go there as well and even support it there as well. I see this as further advertisement and support this method so that many people can read the novel along with other novels in other websites that some readers have found while others do not even know about. If you got this far in my review i hope i have shed a little light as to how i feel about this novel. I hope everyone also enjoys this novel and is willing to support it in their own as i am trying in mine so that this novel can get recognized even more. Happy reading everyone!

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