Review Detail of Verti_Falabrella in IS IT LOVE?
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On one hand, I think the subject is interesting. On the other, I really think there needs to be a lot of work on your writing skills. The opening of the book felt very much like a monologue to a straight to DVD sequel movie. I think you would benefit from reading other authors and seeing a bit of how they describe and how they transition. I know this might seem harsh, but if you had good writing, this story would be improved by leaps and bounds.
IS IT LOVE?
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No worries. And I do have to that the mc needs to first go on self-discovery too. She needs to love herself before she enters a new relationship. She needs to reflect on her old toxic relationship and cast it aside.
Briana_Ebanks_8993:Thank you so much for your review. I don't mind if it's harsh, it tells me the areas that I need to work on. This is my first time writing and I'm still learning, so I'll take every critique I get and try to make it better. I'll pause the uploads and fix it. Thanks again.