Review Detail of Jackal_Zirson in RWBY: Dungeons

I really really, like this story, but the updating stability is a huge turn off when it comes to a novel like this, and your final few chapters seem to make it look like its getting shorter and shorter as time goes on, ive added it to my library in hopes that it will begin updating more often and with longer chapters. But otherwise the story is really good! all these small details your adding to the lore are making it feel like an entire new kind of RWBY i enjoyed reading it alot!