Review Detail of Jack_Anarchy in na yea na yea

Writing quality is good. But this ff is suffering from lets call it "protagonist simp main character" its when instead of focusing on his own adventure, gaining power ect. Mc go and find the protagonist. join Luffy pirates, befriends Naruto and babysit them with knolage of future. Here mc is stick around Killua, and their relationship... Mc is kinda acting Beta too much. Btw. Portals are meh Keep it up. Good luck. Goodbye!