What nonsense is that of losing half your weight and that only one object can enter a black hole, so if they throw three or four attacks on you, you can only absorb one? Fence nonsense, I thought that this novel could have potential but I see that no, I'm out.
nightRox
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LIKENow that I went to see this clown. He did a review just because he was angry at something he didn't like. He even gives a shit note for work, just because of that detail, and he didn't even properly evaluate the story. Like the qualities in character development, dialogue, creativity and etc. What this reader did was pure waste of space. At least he should talk about the good things that liked. For example: What did you like about the story?
I almost don't read your story because of this comment, I think you should delete this comment because this comment has nothing to do with the story. And its lover your rating and I don't read novels with low rating(because of that who knows how many gems I missed)
nightRox:Oh yea also, he will be able to summon in more than one portal