Writing Quality-The writing quality is reay good compare to most fanfictions in this app. Story Development- The story is rather slow but I think the author is just developing the MC because the guy came from another world with MC haven't kill anyone from his previous world. Character Design- The MC likes Gon and Killua's friendship and kinda jealous of their friendship but hopefully the MC won't follow Gon and Killua around and actually have his own adventure. Maybe he can go with Kurapika to be a boduguard, he can go meet with Killua and Gon when Chimera Ant starts. Updating Stability- It's been okay so far. World Background: It's HxH, you can be reborn 20 years in advance from canon. You can also be one of the princes (if you're a manga reader then you'll know.) or be friends with one of them and go with them in the succession arc.
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