Reveal spoiler

Author Review- The writing quality of this novel is alright, high school standard (Cuz I am in High school) If you give a bad review please tell why, not just that the Mc's powers are confusing (are not). Anyways bad review are welcome but please give feedback. bye have fun reading

Love your story , have a few questions hope you answer if he knows about the prince inheritance arc or war why not try to find some countermeasure against that or a way to block or seal any hatsu or specialist ability. Also cant he come up with a way to steal hatsu or make himself a artificial chimera ant , it would be a good boost finally the nen writing which ging used on the cube why not make it like seals or runes

I won't lie. I've only read the first chapter and dropped this. But for a good reason. The Author chose a name that is completely out of tune with the names of the other Zolydyck Children. Now, you may be thinking, 'That's not a big deal'. But it is. It shows the author has a sub-standard understanding of the Zolydck family and maybe even HxH as a whole. The Zolydcks have an interesting and tumultuous relationship that has to be approached properly. Reading about a MC that has the name Amon just ruins it for me. Idk, if you have no taste and don't respect the original work, maybe you'll enjoy this.

the writing quality is great I haven't even been able to find a single grammar or spelling mistake stability of updates are great idk when he released em but we usually get 2-3 chapters a week, we just reached cannon so they might push the speed of chapters for motivation or stick with their usual routine, either way i am okay story development is amazing, they actually look at the zoldyck family even at Kikyo and showing time with her and the mc character design is good they stay relative to the zoldyck colors unlike some others where mc is a rainbow haired zoldyck or smth they make the mc a bit weak which gives a 4/5 if there was an option to give 4.5 i would because they actually have variety and not just show handsome in all characters world background is alright

It's kinda becoming a story where mc baby sits the main characters it could just be for the arc but it really doesn't help him preventing Hisoka from obsessing over Gon and insisting on Kuropika and Leorio going to train. It may only bother me though since the Zoldyck's are a family of assasins.

Amazing 3 chapter and Iam alardy hooked There not alot of HXH fanfiction in this site but I read every single one and this is one of the best so far and I pry to god that you don’t stop writing it

Writing quality is good. But this ff is suffering from lets call it "protagonist simp main character" its when instead of focusing on his own adventure, gaining power ect. Mc go and find the protagonist. join Luffy pirates, befriends Naruto and babysit them with knolage of future. Here mc is stick around Killua, and their relationship... Mc is kinda acting Beta too much. Btw. Portals are meh Keep it up. Good luck. Goodbye!

............................................................................................................................................

IMO the Amon shouldn't be chained down to the protagonists(Gon, Killua, Leorio, Kurapika), although it's nice that he sometimes hangs out with them. He needs to do his own things, being by himself or with people other than the four main characters. I also don't think he should teach Nen to Killua and Gon, the basics would be alright, but not advanced nen, Bisky ought to teach them. Making him join Genei Ryodan and romance Machi would be something I'd rather enjoy since I like a little bit of romance in everything.