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LallunaRyu
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2020-12-21 15:52

I like the storyline, it flows and the emotions flow so that we can feel what the main character feels. I like the plot which is very sweet. But, the main character is very weak, like a woman, I don't like it. Hopefully he can get tough with that trash. However, I still give my five star for this book. I hope you can update more often.

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Thanks for your kind feedback! I would try to update a few chapters in a week. 😊

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