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sooo...I am here to talk about MC's childhood friend Hanna...I think there is a misunderstanding about her relationship with Tatsuya...first of all her relationship with MC is not a love relationship but a friendship so her having a boyfriend other than the MC is not a betrayal to him and all his thoughts about her are his delusion so BLAMING her on a misunderstanding is wrong, to begin with...of course, we can't ignore what that bastard Tatsuya did with Raiden to kill the MC...so what I want to say is that because she has a relationship with a bastard don't make her a bad girl or anything even if she had ⓢⓔⓧ with him because she is still worried about MC even when he ignored her so she is not two-faced or anything like that but just a childhood friend that had a boyfriend other than the MC. so want her to have a bad ending is just so much. as for Rei...well, I don't understand what is wrong with her having a boyfriend?. finally his sister ... you know Mr. author when I read this part as the end of chapter 32. I wanted to say WTF if he had such intelligence little sister then why did he suffer so much. from her introduction, she seems to be an influential person, and if she is the one who makes him go to this school then how did she was oblivious to his wellbeing inside the school. Also, some readers expected that Raiden will Rape her or make her his girlfriend. but I expect something more meaningful from you Mr. author And I wish that you would not do anything stupid like that... also, please make sure that the MC had enough time and encounters to mature in some meaningful way instead of his current almost-crazy state.. so, please don't make him come back with this immature mentality. I think all readers like the Intelligence and serene MC. because no one will read hundreds of chapters about immature individual and his journey to revenge against some kids and instead of making clean revenge he will just go on unending revenge with their families or something like that. so again. if you planning to take your time in making him mature then it's okay just don't let him come back before maturing enough. also don't make him do silly mistakes like coming bake to school to flaunt his strength or to make everyone regrets what they did with him, ...etc. just let him make a secret organisation or something like that, and make sure to let him indifferent enough to the life and death of the people. because he should have lost his humanity in the day they betrayed him. also, I don't know what plans you have for Hanna but just make it quick and bearable maybe something like enslaves her or disfiguring her with X-mark on her face in a moment of rage. or maybe he will just ignore her and make her suffer emotionally... anyway I still don't understand how she is wrong but whatever you want to do then do it. finally, make sure to satisfy us when he takes care of all his classmates in a very beautiful and satisfying way. (I really don't know why I wrote so much for 32 chapters...) and thanks for writing such a good novel, please don't stop. work hard Mr. Author.
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NTR until now is supposed to be when MC's Childhood friend (that he doesn't know her that much) protect him and cared about him a lot because they are there Mothers are old friends so they know each other when they are kids so there's no LOVE whatsoever, they don't even meet for years. but OUR great MC after all the beating, humiliation and even extreme bullying he suffered from his trash classmates found her protection and caring about him as a sign of love and affection but when she is about to tell him about her boyfriend(he is a complete bastard, by the way), he discovered her having ⓢⓔⓧ with her boyfriend by accident inside the classroom (I am sure that bastard boyfriend knows that the MC watching them so he Convinces her to do it) and when he sees her like that he feels betrayed by her and so on and start to ignore her even though she still cares about him. and of course there is the girl by the name Rei that he feels the same about her when he found that she had a boyfriend. and there is no other girl who "NTRed" because until now he has no wife, fiancee, girlfriend...etc... so all the betrayal are just inside the MC's head but of course until his classmates tried to kill him.
Ancient_Egyptian:NTR until now is supposed to be when MC's Childhood friend (that he doesn't know her that much) protect him and cared about him a lot because they are there Mothers are old friends so they know each other when they are kids so there's no LOVE whatsoever, they don't even meet for years. but OUR great MC after all the beating, humiliation and even extreme bullying he suffered from his trash classmates found her protection and caring about him as a sign of love and affection but when she is about to tell him about her boyfriend(he is a complete bastard, by the way), he discovered her having ⓢⓔⓧ with her boyfriend by accident inside the classroom (I am sure that bastard boyfriend knows that the MC watching them so he Convinces her to do it) and when he sees her like that he feels betrayed by her and so on and start to ignore her even though she still cares about him. and of course there is the girl by the name Rei that he feels the same about her when he found that she had a boyfriend. and there is no other girl who "NTRed" because until now he has no wife, fiancee, girlfriend...etc... so all the betrayal are just inside the MC's head but of course until his classmates tried to kill him.
It is not fair to say this about him, because despite everything he is a victim of humiliation and bullying from the whole school, and therefore when he finds people who treat him with care he thought they were interested in him and put all his hope in them and assumed that they would remain with him until the end or simply thought that they would not be in Affair with these bastards from school. That is why he heartbroken, especially when he saw his childhood friend with her boyfriend in the classroom.
CacackleLasson:Lol the MC sounds more like an assuming loser than someone who gets NTR'd
I would say loser, cuz I was once like that I used to like a girl who was my friend. But then I thought she like me, she didnt and now she had a boyfriend. Was I a loser for thinking she likes me? Yes. Is this guy a loser for assuming as well. Yes.
Ancient_Egyptian:It is not fair to say this about him, because despite everything he is a victim of humiliation and bullying from the whole school, and therefore when he finds people who treat him with care he thought they were interested in him and put all his hope in them and assumed that they would remain with him until the end or simply thought that they would not be in Affair with these bastards from school. That is why he heartbroken, especially when he saw his childhood friend with her boyfriend in the classroom.
CacackleLasson:I would say loser, cuz I was once like that I used to like a girl who was my friend. But then I thought she like me, she didnt and now she had a boyfriend. Was I a loser for thinking she likes me? Yes. Is this guy a loser for assuming as well. Yes.
I tried reading, didnt continue as it reminds me of my old self and reading further brings me physical and emotional pain, I got traumitized actually after reading this as it reminds me of my loser self waiting to die all alone. Which is why I wanna escape reality and read through other novels, this is kinda depressing to be honest.
Ancient_Egyptian:if this is your point of view then it is okay.
this really a depressing topic, and I can't say I understand your feelings but I hope you have a bright future and happy family.
CacackleLasson:I tried reading, didnt continue as it reminds me of my old self and reading further brings me physical and emotional pain, I got traumitized actually after reading this as it reminds me of my loser self waiting to die all alone. Which is why I wanna escape reality and read through other novels, this is kinda depressing to be honest.
What do you mean she cares about him she leT everone bully him even tho she is top 10 strongest in school wtf??
Ancient_Egyptian:NTR until now is supposed to be when MC's Childhood friend (that he doesn't know her that much) protect him and cared about him a lot because they are there Mothers are old friends so they know each other when they are kids so there's no LOVE whatsoever, they don't even meet for years. but OUR great MC after all the beating, humiliation and even extreme bullying he suffered from his trash classmates found her protection and caring about him as a sign of love and affection but when she is about to tell him about her boyfriend(he is a complete bastard, by the way), he discovered her having ⓢⓔⓧ with her boyfriend by accident inside the classroom (I am sure that bastard boyfriend knows that the MC watching them so he Convinces her to do it) and when he sees her like that he feels betrayed by her and so on and start to ignore her even though she still cares about him. and of course there is the girl by the name Rei that he feels the same about her when he found that she had a boyfriend. and there is no other girl who "NTRed" because until now he has no wife, fiancee, girlfriend...etc... so all the betrayal are just inside the MC's head but of course until his classmates tried to kill him.
yep...that what I mean exactly...the author made her behaves foolishly and with unnatural oblivious to his state of mind, but she knows he was being bullied and attempt to help him more than once but she was just unable to see that most of his bullying is because there is a strong bastard who doesn't want her to have any connection with him, and because she is naive to consider that her boyfriend is the main reason for his bullying and death she usually listens to him so it is easy to lead her by the nose without her realising anything. (of course, The author didn't say much about this point so he may change the truth about this to suit the storyline at that time, and everything I said is just my argument and not the reality of this situation.) Hope this makes my point of view clear enough.
Weezyf:What do you mean she cares about him she leT everone bully him even tho she is top 10 strongest in school wtf??
Yes i agree she betrayed him with her foolish behaviour, she has to admiT she didnt care much about him Even tho she said she would Protect and the *** scene that author put hurt mc alot he went mad after that but he didnt do anything about it
Ancient_Egyptian:yep...that what I mean exactly...the author made her behaves foolishly and with unnatural oblivious to his state of mind, but she knows he was being bullied and attempt to help him more than once but she was just unable to see that most of his bullying is because there is a strong bastard who doesn't want her to have any connection with him, and because she is naive to consider that her boyfriend is the main reason for his bullying and death she usually listens to him so it is easy to lead her by the nose without her realising anything. (of course, The author didn't say much about this point so he may change the truth about this to suit the storyline at that time, and everything I said is just my argument and not the reality of this situation.) Hope this makes my point of view clear enough.
yep, she is made to be his breaking point and I don't know if the author is going to make her a side character or heroin because the author (if you read more than 50 chapters) made some non-praiseworthy decision so yeah, that's it.
Weezyf:Yes i agree she betrayed him with her foolish behaviour, she has to admiT she didnt care much about him Even tho she said she would Protect and the *** scene that author put hurt mc alot he went mad after that but he didnt do anything about it
Ancient_Egyptian:yep, she is made to be his breaking point and I don't know if the author is going to make her a side character or heroin because the author (if you read more than 50 chapters) made some non-praiseworthy decision so yeah, that's it.
Ancient_Egyptian:NTR until now is supposed to be when MC's Childhood friend (that he doesn't know her that much) protect him and cared about him a lot because they are there Mothers are old friends so they know each other when they are kids so there's no LOVE whatsoever, they don't even meet for years. but OUR great MC after all the beating, humiliation and even extreme bullying he suffered from his trash classmates found her protection and caring about him as a sign of love and affection but when she is about to tell him about her boyfriend(he is a complete bastard, by the way), he discovered her having ⓢⓔⓧ with her boyfriend by accident inside the classroom (I am sure that bastard boyfriend knows that the MC watching them so he Convinces her to do it) and when he sees her like that he feels betrayed by her and so on and start to ignore her even though she still cares about him. and of course there is the girl by the name Rei that he feels the same about her when he found that she had a boyfriend. and there is no other girl who "NTRed" because until now he has no wife, fiancee, girlfriend...etc... so all the betrayal are just inside the MC's head but of course until his classmates tried to kill him.