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2021-02-21 13:07

The story is awesome. gain my attention from the first chepter. writing quality: Author's writing quality is very good although she very new writer and this is her first book. story development : From what I have read The story is not that of slow pace in which write add forcefull events to lengthen the plot. Character design : characters are designed well. but yes there is still chance of development. Updating stability is good. story is setup in mordon World the there is nothing much to say about world background. in the end it is not a perfect story but it's worthy of giving try. well this is only my review. but give it a try atleast. 👍 keep up good work author

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"You can't run away." This is what I wanna say to all the passers-by who had got recommendations of this book but they're not skipping it without opening. "I will definitely find you again." This is what the book is saying to all of those passersby. So it's all up to you to read it right now or again when all the chapters will be lock and you'll have to pay to read. Well it's not like I'm going to not tell why I'm saying all of that. I'm definitely gonna tell you so now listen carefully. This book has what you call a mind-corrupting thrill, it will definitely corrupt your mind. The book is full with suspense, there is always a mysterious vibe surrounding the leads, which makes you wonder more about the story, next there is the not-so-good-feeling background at many places which brings out the creepy scenes of movies you had seen earlier. For example a guy at night coming out at place and texting [I'm here] and then the scene where the [You can't run away] text appeared. Well these are few scenes where I felt, I shouldn't read this book at night. Now about the story performance in general, so there is stable updates with good writing quality and consistent plot, that is definitely a rarity nowadays, I have read some books where author just write fake chapters for days. But unlike those authors this author is good, there's not much grammar problem, and the author himself answers in case of queries. I mean author is genuinely good, you can ask him anything anytime and he'll reply you positively. Now before ending let me clarify few things I have not read the whole work, I have just read till the free chaps end, but I'm pretty sure I'm still underrating this work, this work really deserve some more praise and I'm not saying this because I feel really bad for breaking a promise with author or I need some help of author, I genuinely mean it. All in all the author is doing a fine job. I hope he'll send me some codes so that I can read the locked chapters too.

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