Review Detail of Covering_Legends in Sammyboy's Erotica

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Covering_LegendsLv13yrCovering_Legends

I really liked the original stories, the volume 2 stories were a little confusing, because suddenly it's a model/girl's POV. Took me awhile to understand what happened there

Sammyboy's Erotica

Moonfish

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MoonfishAuthorMoonfish

Apologies! I originally only explained at the end of that first chapter, and I have added an explanation at the start!

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KuronekonyaaLv1Kuronekonyaa

I can't help but agree, it got rather confusing... Maybe the author can try separating them to different books? Or write about it at the top of volume 2.

3yr

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Covering_LegendsLv1Covering_Legends

same book is fine, as long as it's well organized

Kuronekonyaa:I can't help but agree, it got rather confusing... Maybe the author can try separating them to different books? Or write about it at the top of volume 2.
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3yr

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