I don't know why but your MC reminded me of Desmond from Vampire Diaries (the book not the movies) it's not just the name it's how they you know. It's hard to explain. Although I'm confused at the start. With the young man reference, I don't whose it's referring to. But overall you're story's awesome. You start the first chapter with action and that's super cool. Keep up the good work author!
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