The story is quite intriguing with the plot being the one the draws you. Although a few mistakes, it's readable so I wouldn't emphasize on it that much. The characters are interesting to know about as well. So overall, i think ur story has potential!
DragonKnov
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LIKEWell, like i said, it's readable. There're only a few mistakes, like places where u should a comma or full-stop. Some typos. But everything's ok no need to worry that much [img=recommend]
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