Review Detail of LyingCrowPromises in The Most Satisfied Reincarnate

The premise of the story is good. A family running away from enemies gets to live a new life after a long time. At the same time, one of their children is a reincarnated boy who prides himself in being selfish, which will become his strength in the new world. He even gets a system that helps him grow. The writing quality is, honestly, readable, but it contains many mistakes, from punctuation to grammar and spelling. Especially the first chapter. If you fix the first chapter a bit, I think you'd be better off. Characters are all interesting, but still not well-developed, but I know that takes time to learn and do. World background is the usual medieval fantasy magic, but still well-written nonetheless, so I have no complaints. I'd like the author to expand on it, and to also, when describing, pays attention to how they write, as they have the tendency to write everything that is a part of the plot instead of doing it mildly. Anyway, I like the story, and hope that the author will improve even further. Do your best!