Review Detail of JimmyBlah in In the World of Sword and Magic as Space Marine

Item: In the World of Sword and Magic as Space Marine
Rating: 3

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JimmyBlahLv143yrJimmyBlah

Good idea, poor execution. Not trying to be rude but you also need to work on grammar... having our mc being called an ‘adventure’ instead of ‘adventurer’ multiple times in a row was the straw that broke the camel’s back here 😅.

In the World of Sword and Magic as Space Marine

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The_Swedish_KnightLv11The_Swedish_Knight

Yea but he also said it in the authors thought. That he was new and not to be to harsh on him for the grammar.

1yr

GodymandiasLv4Godymandias

it's not an excuse. if you can't even write proper English then don't write at all.

The_Swedish_Knight:Yea but he also said it in the authors thought. That he was new and not to be to harsh on him for the grammar.

11mth

Daoist_DanLv10Daoist_Dan

Who's going to tell him?

Godymandias:it's not an excuse. if you can't even write proper English then don't write at all.

11mth