read 5 chaps and i can say that i dropped this bcs so much unclear facs, doesnt make sense story, and need a lot improving about world, mc, story, and etc... but keep writing
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thats because i explain later on. 5 chaps isnt enough i am giving a mystery. but thank you for the review
well if thats case than good but its important to left good story on stary so we know what we read and etc.. but overall its good keep writing
Bobbydale_Murr:thats because i explain later on. 5 chaps isnt enough i am giving a mystery. but thank you for the review
i think your too impatient. i have way of writing. but you are getting at me after 5 chaps. i think your just a troll.
The novel is convoluted... and I've read for more than a 100 chapters. The flashbacks don't add mystery to the story but makes everything more confusing. To anyone who reads this comment... would you continue reading a novel that makes no sense for more than a 100 chapters ?
"Overall it's good" then why the heck are you giving one star. It makes complete sense, almost no good novel tells you everything in just 5 chapters. You learn about the past over time, you appear to be a troll.
RelativelySad:well if thats case than good but its important to left good story on stary so we know what we read and etc.. but overall its good keep writing
