Review Detail of 100Fahrenheit in Marvel: My Empire

To the Author. Decided to put a review simply to give what I consider a good advice. Dialogue and interractions between characters of Ancient One and MC feels very artificial. When you talk to someone you do not explain everything, give answers to everything and say everything you know. Your dialogue feels like a rehearsed scene with overly detailed explanation, preemptive answers to all possible questions and structured like legalesse or teacher trying to explain slightly challenging topic to young kids. People even if they wish to say everything and anything that’s on their mind cannot do so simply because some are not articulate enough, some are too emotional and most do not know what whoever they are talking to are thinking or feeling. Or it could be because they don’t have the time to think and formulate their answers ;) People do not have time to think like you do, in front of the computer to reply. It’s dialogue, it’s spontaneous, even if both parties came to the discussion with their own script.