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Item: The Bet
Rating: 4.6

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ssfx3yuchensLv103yrssfx3yuchens

ssfx3yuchens here with honest review. Honestly I have to say I am quite taken with this story, it is relaxing and easy to read and understand, and the pacing is good. I enjoyed it a lot. In overall, there are a few noticeable grammatical errors in the beginning, but other than that, it's really good. The plotline looks promising[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

The Bet

Jo_J

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Jo_JAuthorJo_J

Thank you. I expected more criticism ;)

3yr

ssfx3yuchensLv10ssfx3yuchens

I probably can't until I can write better. [img=update]

Jo_J:Thank you. I expected more criticism ;)

3yr

Jo_JAuthorJo_J

You write good, just think about greater audience scope ;)

ssfx3yuchens:I probably can't until I can write better. [img=update]

3yr

ssfx3yuchensLv10ssfx3yuchens

I guess I'm a cultural writer. I joined webnovel thinking it was an Asian reading community. Since they're pretty much based in Asia

Jo_J:You write good, just think about greater audience scope ;)

3yr

ssfx3yuchensLv10ssfx3yuchens

Plus my book is written from Chinese mindset..

Jo_J:You write good, just think about greater audience scope ;)

3yr

Jo_JAuthorJo_J

but that doesn't mean they people from all over the world can not read your novel ;) think about it that way

ssfx3yuchens:Plus my book is written from Chinese mindset..

3yr

Jo_JAuthorJo_J

not any more

ssfx3yuchens:I guess I'm a cultural writer. I joined webnovel thinking it was an Asian reading community. Since they're pretty much based in Asia

3yr

ssfx3yuchensLv10ssfx3yuchens

sad to know.

Jo_J:not any more

3yr

Jo_JAuthorJo_J

Why?

ssfx3yuchens:sad to know.

3yr

ssfx3yuchensLv10ssfx3yuchens

well I'm a cultural writer so I'm hoping my stories will reach more Asian readers 😂

Jo_J:Why?

3yr

ssfx3yuchensLv10ssfx3yuchens

it's written from an eastern point of view so they might not comprehend why the leads are thinking this way.

Jo_J:but that doesn't mean they people from all over the world can not read your novel ;) think about it that way

3yr