Review Detail of Jkhan_MV in Naruto: The Grey King
Review detail
Hmm. The story starts great. Grammar issues here and there but readable. Goes on for a while stable development. Then the problem came. Character development is terrible. The interactions, reactions, how they behave, and how they respond is shit. There are also many very cringe worthy moments. The author is forceful in writing dialog between characters that makes them behave uncharacteristically. Worth the read = yes should be enough to pass the time. Worth subscribing = not in this life or the next.
Naruto: The Grey King
MohitGOD
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He does. The fact that he’s even giving constructive criticism is something we rarely see. He knows what a good fanfic is. Using the “it’s a fanfic” argument doesn’t change the fact that this story is not perfect. This is a good one to pass time, but not one I’d actually read consistently because there are just better ones out there(that have better dialogue and character dev) *shrug*
Senior_Black:do you know what fanfic is? because after reading your review i don't think you know what fanfic is.
You need to deactivate your brain if you want to read this. You can't explain what's happening even with anime logic... So you need to become fool and thank for the chapters after some time. There wouldn't be any brain gels left for some meaningful comment... If you persist in reading it. There already a few handicapped, so be warned...
Есть понятие - дерьмовый фанфик. Есть понятие - хороший фанфик. И даже есть понятие - шедевральный фанфик. А данный фанфик - голимое дерьмо!
Senior_Black:do you know what fanfic is? because after reading your review i don't think you know what fanfic is.