hi this is me CCake. writing was good but some words are missing and some were wrong so write carfully. story development was really good feels like a fantasy and thriller would like to read more. characters are great too. I will rate stability after some more chapters and work on world background because I can't imagine where they are could be big ben could be tokyo so I don't know.
Kagayaki
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