As the author, I obviously have a biased viewpoint on my own work! That said, maybe you can help me get better by posting reviews and chapter comments! I would love to hear any and all feedback.
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Author reading the synopsis, I was wondering about the last portion . when you say giving up his path, does that mean he stops getting strong as a conductor!? A sacrificial protagonist is something I am not too keen on as I've read stories where main protagonist die and it doesn't feel good at least to me. so I was curious as to what you mean by the last portion of the synopsis .
Well i cant say a whole lot but i can tell you that you dont need to worry about that too much and in any event we're a long way off from the end of that synopsis it'll be a near a thousand chapters before you have to worry about that
Hmm I see. Thats a long way off and a lot of story. I can totally understand why you can't say much. Though I do hope even in the future , he doesn't give up his powers and not progress to the highest level his potential can take him. I dont want Cypher to end up pitiful like his dad. I would like him to take revenge as well. I feel like Cypher being overpowered is necessary for him to keep both sides at bay and stop them from destroying the world and causing massive casualties . After all only by having strength can you uphold your morals, gain genuine respect and bring about peace . Only might is respected in a world with superpowers after all . If ensuring the greater good of everyone required of him to sacrifice his path to greater strength and reaching unknown heights as well as waste his potential, it would be bittersweet .I would have mixed feelings since it's very nice of him to ensure everyone a good future but its equally tragic as his hardwork from the very beginning is laid to waste and he would end up a hollow man . I don't mean to influence the way you write the story in any manner Author . I am simply giving you my perspective as a reader since I chanced upon your story and found the story premise to be quite interesting. its about maintaining status quo and not defeating evil. I do like seeing Mcs going through struggles and overcoming extreme odds as well not having much luck either and having to do things the hard way . it adds realism to the story . what I cant easily accept is... an mc not being able to be the best they can be. So the aforementioned is just my two cents and I am not sure if there are other readers like me. Take it for what you will.
author does the mc get a system
