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alright I have lots of reason why I rate this story below 3 star but im gonna save another poor soul before they read this story so 1. Author decide to make MC aka Lucifer Stupid & did more stupid stuff in order to expand word count, some problem could easily be solve in few paragraph but nope author decide to make mc did stupid stuff in order to increase the word count like directly hacking SHIELD & get himself interrogate while he could simply use his other identity to solve his problem including lucifer bootlicking Tony stark because he didn't want to build his own connection. 2. Author Strictly would never ever let mc do some drastic action & make sure the story line strictly follow the cannon making this story a self insert rewrite wish fulfillment novel, no idea whether there'll be Harem since I drop this story. 3. Author way too underestimate the infinte stone of MCU.

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A Slime in MCU

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