Review Detail of enthu_reader in The Abandoned Hunter

Ten chapters in and I already find myself hooked up with the story! I loved Jay and the Black dragon 😂 Jay's internal monologue was funny. Storyline and characters are really interesting! The plot pace is good, not too slow or fast. Keep that up 😊 Updates are also stable 👍 Writing is good but there are few grammar mistakes eg: you put internal thoughts in quotation marks too, so reader can get confused it it's a thought or dialogue. For the rest of the minor errors, the author can use Grammarly tool to edit chapters and they will be easily fixed. That will help a lot 😊 But otherwise the story is engaging and interesting. Would definitely recommend readers to give it a try ☺️ Good luck with your novel author and keep it up! 🥰