Review Detail of Sun23 in deleted book...

The beginning of the story is heartbreaking! *cries cries Even though short, the mini description of the female lead parents love is so sad, but warming at the same time. While reading the story, there were sentences that need to be reword in order for a better reading flow, but no need to worry. It's not like it's going to be the end of the world if it's not fix. Toward the latest chapters, lol, I start to cower in embarrassment at some chapters...Ahem. Let say it very cringey, not bad cringey, but when reading to those parts I feel a bit shy. Ai ya, this shy pure maiden haven't been to that side of life, no, love yet! In overall, the story is heading toward a good start. When reading, I feel like the female lead is so fragile, weak, so weak that she could shatter at any moment with what's been happening in her life. But thats not it at all, the female is strong. A strong women that doesn't give up!