Review Detail of KCChakry in Pandora's Curse: Key To Immortality

Firstly, the writing quality is pretty good. The descriptions and the narrative style is well done. There are a few instances of tense switches here and there, but they are nothing major. Next, the story and character development, I felt to be a bit rushed. We were just getting into the story and there was an apocalypse and then the large time skip. Although, it is understandable since the main story happens in the after-apocalypse world and bits and pieces of her life are revealed from time to time. I just feel it might've better to take it a bit slow and set things up before the time skip so readers could better relate to and compare the two sides of her life. Lastly, the world background was well established but it could use a bit more descriptions to paint a clear picture. But that's just me, as I like to build a world through the words author writes. And not many would like it since it drags the story pacing so its fine. Finally, its a good book with a great potential depending on how the later story is told. All the best.