Review Detail of RJMidnight in Pandora's Curse: Key To Immortality

Im not the one for female leads nor romance. But I always give an honest review. Your story knows how to hook a reader with the action you give. It is promising and on the right track. You do have some grammar mistakes and your style of writing does confuse me a bit, but does not throw away from the story. Other than that, keep up the good work!