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GAMING_IS_MUST
GAMING_IS_MUSTLv143yr
2021-04-12 22:34

the ranking system is needlessly complicated, you could have put the same type of rankings in most of the things but it's uselessly multiplied. I have to repeatedly go to the auxiliary chapter to make sure which ranking this is so 3 star on world background for that. I actually wanted to give 2 star at first but considering you are a new author and all.... well 140 words are over long ago

Dragon Incarnation

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