Review Detail of val_the_mysterious in Rightful Vengeance

Interesting story concept. The world-building is good and introduced at a nice pace. The MC is well thought out and easy to follow. The early chapters really draw you into her life before things went bad and pull you down with her. Really enjoying the world-building and the unique take on classic monsters. Writing improves as you go, which is a sign of a good writer. You should always keep improving. Love the story, keep up the good work.