Review Detail of Alpha_Medic in Seven Deadly Sins System: The Technology Emperor

Nice work, so far! Sorry it took me so long to get to reading. I'm on CH. 6 so far, and I like how you're slowly building the story, the characters, and the world. Keep dropping those teases and I think your story is going to be amazing! Don't let the nay-sayers get you down, as you've got so much potential, and I look forward to your success! I think my only real critique is focus a bit more attention on grammar, and that would get you to a full 5 star review from me, as well!