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ForeverPupa
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2020-11-17 16:31

I love this storyy! the writing style is amazing, grim, serious, and it suck you in! Each story is also interesting! Good job author! cant wait for more! ^^

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JcPancakes
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A collection of short stories of different universes and timelines, much involved in the question of morality, philosophy and behaviour. It feels like I'm reading Philip Dick's or Liu Cixin's works. Writing Quality: The writing quality is great. Little if not, no mistakes. I find the writing very logical, which is a writing style on its own. Stability of Updates: From the history of updates, it looks a little erratic but stabilised to a more consistent update now. Hope this continues. Story Development: Despite the nature of a collection of short stories, the story development is good and has a lot of potentials. Each story has its own interesting plot. However, I think the stories' potential is cut short. I understand that its a freewrite and a standalone can be done if requested by many, but I don't think each stories' true potential is shown yet. Character Design: I think character design is the main weakness of the author. The characters in every story feels one-dimensional, maybe not enough time to flesh out their personalities. Every main character sounds logical but devoid of human emotions. I actually liked the side characters more than the main ones. Most of the time, the main characters feel anti-social and technical. It would be really nice to have some variation to have the readers sympathise with your characters. World Background: I think this is the author's strong point. The world background is introduced in detail, even with limited words. I really like the context, the landscape, the background, the setting. It is written in an immaculate fashion. Very well done. 5 stars.

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