Passable, and cliched. Author tells, rather than shows, which means you don't really get immersed in the story. The translator has probably heard of the full stop / period since they use it in the middle of paragraphs, but every paragraph ends with an exclamation mark, which is pretty jarring but took me about 20 chapters to get used to.
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