Review Detail of 000911 in Pokemon - A real story
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It's pretty good to read from time to time...Only problem is that it have many grammatical and writing mistakes...Like sometimes, there are no use of comma, and sometimes the placement and use of words are not right... But it is good specially since there are many types of things that differentiate it from other pokemon ff and also has its own characteristics of things...The storyline for example, is really great and same with the pace of the story...My only problem is that the chapters are too short...I mean even if its in the 500+ chapters, i wouldn't be satisfied if each chapter are too short itself...Like, I would be satisfied and also always wait for the updates even if its 3 ch a week as long as its long...Like, 1000/1500/2000 word count
Pokemon - A real story
TheSilverPrince
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Thanks for the review. I know there are some grammatical mistakes. I try hard to correct all of them but it is very hard to get an editor. The word count is now at an average of 2k words per chapter and I believe it is plenty enough. I also write side stories of the novel and they are only available in pat-reon. Reading the side stories will give you a better world view of the novel. Right now there is a special offer of 'Story of Vetal'. It is the story of Shedinja when it was training under Gengar. It has around 26 chapters and you can only get access to it if you are a pat-reon member. The offer expires in 4 days. So, if you are interested in the story, you can also subsribe to my pat-reon https://www.--patreon.com/TheSilverPrince1 delete the '--' after 'www.'
As a summarized version... Its good and need to be place in a higher ranking but not that much. It has great storylines and chapter update, the writing quality need some work on and also the word count but is enjoyable and great to read...Definitely recomment it to others who are interested in this kinds of story
I am actually not sure if the word count is short or its great since I always seems to think its too short, so its probably only my opinion and thinking
000911:As a summarized version... Its good and need to be place in a higher ranking but not that much. It has great storylines and chapter update, the writing quality need some work on and also the word count but is enjoyable and great to read...Definitely recomment it to others who are interested in this kinds of story