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Mehsimen
MehsimenAuthor4yr
2020-10-07 16:15

When the followers did not evaluate, I said I would do it myself. Because of my eye problem, I can write a part in half a day. After writing it, I translate it to English. I am correcting mistakes in translation for an hour. then I check again with the translation program. After all, I'm publishing the episode. My reward for doing all this is eye pain that I have to endure. There may be errors in the sections after what I have done, but I will not edit it further. Because I do not gain anything from this. I wrote it for fun.

A STAR LEGEND ( Versatile mage Fan-fic )

Mehsimen
3.4
34 Chs

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Mrpepepopo
MrpepepopoLv4

hey at least you're not blind

4yr
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Tonyorobsky
TonyorobskyLv13

Lacking and rushed. The writing quality suffer from the mediocre translation and lack of editing. The characters lack depth. Not enough interactions. The parents and grandparents are barely known. The love interest was barely part of the story, so them being together, while expected, was just dumped on us. The characters and surroundings lack descriptions. Too much focus on the level-ups of the elements, and status updates. No real training or cultivating shown. Just the results.

4yr

Forgettable_Author
Forgettable_AuthorLv4

please correct your he or she because they always repeat and when you mention mc you always change it to she and the chapter 3 or 4 has many mistake please change it

4yr
Ulvr_Laoch
Ulvr_LaochLv15

Low score due to not knowing what gender the MC is, also for the harem path. If there is a harem there is no plot. So far as I have read, it is confusing to say the least. there is the beginnings of a plot but it seems like it's going to just become a wish fulfillment story. No building on the characters except for the time he got slashed by a rat.

4yr
Dayside
DaysideLv12

Not very good, lots of issues. Too lazy to make a long review, not worth your time.

4yr
Daoist896097
Daoist896097Lv1

It's a very good novel. [img=exp]..............................................................................................................................

4yr
Phoenix_Paradise
Phoenix_ParadiseLv5

Grammar and punctuation need improving, it's hard to read through all the sentence errors. Getting the correct gender for the characters is also needed. It seems like an okay read but there is a big need for improvement, writing-wise. Those are some of the things that need improving.

4yr
slayte
slayteLv13

seems like it would be a great book but I can't stand the fact that the grammar is so bad if it gets fixed I will come back and read it again even if the mc is a girl

4yr
TotalWeeb
TotalWeebLv5

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Whtvr
WhtvrLv5

MC is Man, but author always uses She, Her. Grammar is not very good. This is chapter 3 and I want to drop the novel already. one hundred and forty words

4yr
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