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2021-09-06 23:18

the quality of English in this story is honestly shocking. with some basic editing it could have been acceptable even with the generally poor quality writing outside of the grammatical mistakes. the story in the first chapter jumps from in a parking lot to suddenly take off the school day is over it's very confusing to follow what is going on

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