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Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv144yr
2020-11-27 01:51

Writing Quality - 3 Stars Story Development -2 Stars Character Design -1 Star Updating Stability -3 Stars World Background -1Star Writing Quality [ not much to say here, Prove reading is not a thing here, and yeah, not bad otherwise ] Story Development [ I don't see the Mc getting more mature and it has some Chinese feeling in it but I doubt that the author is Chinese. ] Character Design [ Well, the Mc is just pathetic, and having secrets is not existing here. I mean, Why tell his friends everything about him and Giving people he just met and threatened his bank acc where they can get money from is also not intelligent! The Mc is also hyper cringe and a hypocrite. To his friends, I have some things I also don't tell my friends and they are a lot less important than those things in the Story. I mean, we are in a world where people can read minds so....keeping secrets even from friends is important! etc etc ] Etc Erc, I am too lazy again, like always **: English isn't my mother language so don't blame me!

Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Alexander_the_grey
4.5
206 Chs

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Unchainedx
UnchainedxLv5

Reveal spoiler

4yr

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

Harry Potter the rise of the Beta boy! Do you want a subservient puppy?!! :) Well, here I am!! I will be your personal house-elf, clean your bed, tell you all my secrets and be overall a subservient little BOY!! A cuck boy!!

4yr
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

hmmmm i remember this one is at 3.9 the last time and my review also got deleted, or the creator make a new account and repost all the chapter and seeing it was posted 3 days ago i might be right. p.s the mc is a beta character

4yr
5head
5headLv14

a well thought out and we'll executed fanfic. the story is about 30 - 45% canon and the rest is original. a good MC that, although helps others, is still not naiv and can deal with threats. excellent grammar as well as spelling. side characters are OC and has personal development as well as play a good role of the book, but not so much it outshines the MC. Ps. nice romance as well, not rushed but not prolonged, and got built up well.

4yr
Fantasy_Dream
Fantasy_DreamLv3

Hmmm I still remember a few bad review in this section Hmmm I still remember a few bad review in this section Hmmm I still remember a few bad review in this section

4yr
Roktah
RoktahLv15

i dont know whats going on this is definately a copy of the muggleborn conspiracy. the author doesn't even hide it. Author of this Novel:Alexander_the_grey and MC of Muggleborn Conspiracy:Alexander Grey. Thats not to say there are no differences between the novels its just not enough to count as a seperate one. This feels more like a rewrite with slight alterations.

4yr
D1cky_101
D1cky_101Lv14

An copycat of muggleborn conspiracy but with flat storyline,no significant conflict,Op wannabe mc where he just got power from the so called dark ritual,and where everyone is fucking good guy

4yr
Mlnt
MlntLv4

Finally there is a Harry Potter self-insert fanfiction with a good dumbledore and MC that explores magic. Author, what is the update schedule for this??

4yr
ToujiSouya
ToujiSouyaLv14

A properly done Harry Potter Fanfic. It’s an amazing read and I highly suggest reading it if interested in the slightest bit. Nothing to complain about at all, except that he doesn’t give Sol enough time within the book or showcase him enough even in private which I would enjoy. Overall it’s amazing.

4yr
Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6

I want to give power stones to this story. But it is not available. I want to give power stones to this story. But it is not available. I want to give power stones to this story. But it is not available.

4yr
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