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LiaFeil
LiaFeilLv44yr
2020-09-27 12:06

I hate to say it, but this story is not my cup of tea. The number of harsh words that appeared and uttered by the MC, unclear plot and also the emergence of a break through 4th wall(i really don't know hot to describe it XD) in the middle of the story. Honestly, if Author-san is only writing this story for fun please give a warning in advance so the readers know and don't damage their brain cells ...

Journey to the Multiverse with 6 OP Skills

WomboReader
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Raze_
Raze_Lv5

I agree, not to mention there are consistent grammar errors that make it rather tedious to read

4yr
WomboReader
WomboReaderAuthor

Yeah I should put a warning there

4yr
WomboReader
WomboReaderAuthor

I mean I did put a warning that says: English is not my Native language or First I'm writing this for fun and passing the time

4yr
LiaFeil
LiaFeilLv4

Ah, I'm sorry, I didn't see it. And also forgive me if my words sound harsh to you, as you can see, my English is bad XD. Actually I don't hate the stories you make, it's just that I feel 'weird (?)' When I see the progress of the stories you make.

WomboReader:I mean I did put a warning that says: English is not my Native language or First I'm writing this for fun and passing the time
4yr
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Shadewind
ShadewindLv6

Harem.....?

WomboReader:I mean I did put a warning that says: English is not my Native language or First I'm writing this for fun and passing the time
4yr
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LuxShi
LuxShiLv4

I gotta know, what were the 6 OP skills? ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^<><><><><><><><><><><><><><>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [][][][][][][]

3yr

Dao_of_Melancholy
Dao_of_MelancholyLv13

Yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup

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ILMATTEO
ILMATTEOLv5

Reveal spoiler

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DaoistZIJh4p
DaoistZIJh4pLv3

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Back2Future
Back2FutureLv2

Просто ещё один глупый фик школьника. Ничего не имею против фиков написанных школьниками, но это отзыв и я говорю что не надо тратить время на это.

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