Review Detail of Rifa_Jati in The Origin (MultiVerse Fanfic)

ok this is my review. Writing Quality 5/5: although there are still mistakes but for me it is enough to understand. Story Development 5/5: I love the story development in every world that MC visits. although there are still a few that are odd but still good (for me). Character Design 4/5: I have commented where Mc touched his woman in public but I was wrong. I read back from the beginning and I just realized it was not the groping part. But the kissing where the Mc kissing the dragon girls in front his Guardian Flore for no other reason than the pleasure of kissing ( in the top chapter there is a scenes where Mc kisses in front of his friend but in this scenes Mc has a reason ). other than that the basics of Mc character are good. Updating Stability 5/5 : Everyday Update of course it 5. World Background 5/5 : For now there is no problem, I like the author's thoughts for WB. Ok that it. Thank for you work author. I enjoy your work. I hope you are still passionate about making this work better 😆👍. Sorry if there is a wrong word that i wrote.