Item: The Origin (MultiVerse Fanfic)
Rating: 5
Author: Poseidon_God

Poseidon_GodLv54yr

2020-10-06 01:22

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The Origin (MultiVerse Fanfic)

ProfessorNoob

4.7

63 Chs

Liked by 9 people

Replies8

ProfessorNoobAuthor

Just don't spam here please lol

4yr

Poseidon_GodLv5

ah okay

ProfessorNoob:Just don't spam here please lol

4yr

TintedvCeoLv5

Hey professor we have the same detective thingy

4yr

ProfessorNoobAuthor

Was lucky I had 20k points to buy it 😅

TintedvCeo:Hey professor we have the same detective thingy

4yr

TintedvCeoLv5

I have 40k

4yr

TintedvCeoLv5

I'm a grinding tryhard

4yr

ProfessorNoobAuthor

Nice~ need 10k for that kitty and I don't think I will make it~ wish they give points for writing lol

TintedvCeo:I have 40k

4yr

God_Of_LazinessLv3

I have 20k and the 30k swordsman frame too far 😭😭😭

ProfessorNoob:Nice~ need 10k for that kitty and I don't think I will make it~ wish they give points for writing lol

4yr

Other Reviews

RevisedLv4

Amazing fanfic. I like the MC attitude and personality. I also enjoy the interactions with the characters! Also the author of this fanfic is very funny (the author notes between paragraphs make me lmao🤣🤣) Enjoying the worlds so far cant wait to see which world the author chooses next!

4yr

UtczLv1

man, I like the fic but you could slow down a little in familiar situations, skip less time and add more dialogues, and to not get long just mention less important moments

4yr

FAP_Master_Lv6

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Silver_EpsilonLv12

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jeanpierregerardoLv5

interesing. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

4yr

Daoist21616161Lv4

Quite regular the truth, the writing is a bit loose. MC acts as a babysitter. Good luck.

4yr

Ramenguy_teuchiLv4

keep the good work author!!!!!!. I liked the story so far!!!! 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

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LordKramLv13

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Rifa_JatiLv5

ok this is my review. Writing Quality 5/5: although there are still mistakes but for me it is enough to understand. Story Development 5/5: I love the story development in every world that MC visits. although there are still a few that are odd but still good (for me). Character Design 4/5: I have commented where Mc touched his woman in public but I was wrong. I read back from the beginning and I just realized it was not the groping part. But the kissing where the Mc kissing the dragon girls in front his Guardian Flore for no other reason than the pleasure of kissing ( in the top chapter there is a scenes where Mc kisses in front of his friend but in this scenes Mc has a reason ). other than that the basics of Mc character are good. Updating Stability 5/5 : Everyday Update of course it 5. World Background 5/5 : For now there is no problem, I like the author's thoughts for WB. Ok that it. Thank for you work author. I enjoy your work. I hope you are still passionate about making this work better 😆👍. Sorry if there is a wrong word that i wrote.

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