I managed to read all the 18 chapters. The gap between the first chapter and the second chapter comes after many years have lapsed. This left me a bit confused. The writing quality is good, stability of updates is ok. The story is developing well. The character design and the world background are shaping well. The book is amusing in places. There is a fun element too and an underlying mystery that needs to be solved. I will be watching out for its progress and reading it later on. All the best, Author!
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