Review Detail of LyingCrowPromises in A Three-Ring Circus

The story is light-hearted after the beginning. To be honest, I would make it eerier, the scene where he observed her, but that's my style. You have a good grip of your descriptions, your vocabulary is good and also put to good use. There is not much to say about the world building yet, so I can't give it full marks. I liked the characters, each in their own way, yes, even the killer/kidnapper. Each characters has their own charm. ** After I read the chapters about Mrs. Parker and her huge, juicy, perky butt, I have not stopped thinking about it. Please do write more on that topic.🧐 Keep it up, Author!