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RenuKakkar
RenuKakkarLv54yr
2020-09-18 07:17

I managed to read all the 18 chapters. The gap between the first chapter and the second chapter comes after many years have lapsed. This left me a bit confused. The writing quality is good, stability of updates is ok. The story is developing well. The character design and the world background are shaping well. The book is amusing in places. There is a fun element too and an underlying mystery that needs to be solved. I will be watching out for its progress and reading it later on. All the best, Author!

A Three-Ring Circus

LOVE097
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25 Chs

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Thank you ma'am.

4yr
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Scarlettheartt
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Your story is really good...It is not like those which we read always it is different...It's lighthearted cute story...👍👍 You enjoy those some funny moments inbetween....Very nicely expressed...I love the way you wrote it...Simple story but good one👍👍👍👏👏

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JustLikeWriting777
JustLikeWriting777Lv1

your story is quite different than the ones I've read. I find it very adorable and hilarious. lol. I like how, even though it is meant to be mystery, you added loads of humor and comedy in it. The Carter brothers are indeed relatable and fascinating to understand. Not only that, but to find the connection between them and the murdered girl is what draws the reader the most. So I love it! Hoping for more chapters! :D

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IrisSky
IrisSkyLv3

The story is light and enjoyable to read.... It kept me on my toes and wanting for more.. You have a good grip of your descriptions and vocabulary. I liked the mysterious feeling surrounding the story. Overall a very well written. I am waiting for more...

4yr
Flabbergasted
FlabbergastedLv4

I am so proud of you my fan. You doing perfectly well. The grammar is good as far as I am concerned. Your character development is good too.

4yr
vira_yathy
vira_yathyLv2

Authorrrrrr..... Superbbbbbb.... Till now I am so very happy I read this one... The comedy is ultimate. I am loving it. I will give another review again later when the story develops more... But upto now superb fun.... I totally cracked up... 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

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LyingCrowPromises
LyingCrowPromisesLv10

The story is light-hearted after the beginning. To be honest, I would make it eerier, the scene where he observed her, but that's my style. You have a good grip of your descriptions, your vocabulary is good and also put to good use. There is not much to say about the world building yet, so I can't give it full marks. I liked the characters, each in their own way, yes, even the killer/kidnapper. Each characters has their own charm. ** After I read the chapters about Mrs. Parker and her huge, juicy, perky butt, I have not stopped thinking about it. Please do write more on that topic.🧐 Keep it up, Author!

4yr
DaoistHFcFyL
DaoistHFcFyLLv1

Reveal spoiler

4yr
iam_adh
iam_adhLv2

It's a very light-hearted story and a lot of mystery is tied into it too. However, even though it's supposed to be cloaked with mystery,the author manages to add a lot of comedy to it and I really like that. There are some grammar mistakes here and there, but besides that, it's a really interesting story*adds to library*. You nice,keep going!

4yr
prada_murthy
prada_murthyLv13

This book is quite interesting. Just the first chapter and I was already eager to find out more. Nice story author. Now let's come to the writing and the character design. Though there are some minor errors, they do not affect the flow of the story. It is almost flawless and the characters have been well designed. The story is smooth and quite easy to read. All in all, this is a great work, All the best author.

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