Review Detail of amaturewriter in CODE OUROBOROS (Reposted as Twisted Realities) (Undertale X ANIME)

Shadowstar01:Hello and thank you very much for reading my story/fan-story, I will do my best to make this something you can hopefully enjoy. For your question I'll probably post a sort of compendium that will likely be split into multiple chapters covering different categories, E.G. Common Myths, Specific Species, power systems, etc. Though I would like to note that anything featured in the compendium has a chance of not making it to the final story... (This is because I need to make sure the story is well structured, organized, makes sense, etc. All the pieces and gears must work together, I don't want to make a half-baked world, where everything just falls apart halfway through due to ridiculous power scaling or otherwise) This essentially means the compendium would be more like an a collection of ideas that have a high chance of making it, but might be cut if it doesn't make sense when placed in the story, I also might add short stories that don't have any presence in the plot but work to enrich the "verse" if you will, as a whole, to make everything more believable. *whew* ... hopefully that wasn't too much rambling and text, and you should *hopefully* have understood what I was explaining. Anyways, once again thank you for taking the time to read, and review, and of course constructive criticism is always appreciated, requests will be considered and may be implemented as well, E.G. longer/shorter chapter length, a different type of formatting. (That is long and blocky paragraphs above 10 lines or short paragraphs only a few lines big) *hopefully that makes sense* Thanks, The One and Only ~ Celestial Abyss [Shadowstar01]