The story is good as a reader we do well i dont like it when authors write "omg, rn, gtg" stuff like that. For me that is just a no for me, Instead you write "oh my god, right now and got to go" this is just a minor complaint im not trying to be mean or discourage you i just want you to become better as a writer. Hopefully you would take this minor complaint and better yourself with it.
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