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I haven't read more than two chapters however the first 2nd chapter is quite annoying. Why does the GOD bargain with mortals in the first place. Its like arguing with an ant about what their opinion is. The MC in the first place got to have a chance to get wishes and doesn't dwell on that however immediately bargains. A being at that is powerful enough to instantly kill you instead acts like a person on the market an accepts giving out more wishes. I mean to say at least make it realistic. Perhaps the rest of the novel is good however the introduction could be loads better.

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Zenith: Last Revenant

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